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Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-inter-domain-redundancy-05
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Apr-17-2014
IETF LC End Date: Apr-24-2014
IESG Telechat date: Not known.

This document is ready as a Proposed Standard but has some nits and a
minor issue that should be looked at.

Major: 0
Minor: 1
Nits:  7

Minor:

- Section 7, paragraph 2: Okay to use MD5?  Or something stronger...?

Nits:

- Section 1, paragraph 1:
  s/is to provide/provides/

- Section 1, paragraph 2:
  s/options introduced./options are introduced./

- Section 3: What is an "ASBR"?  If it is a well-known term in the
 domain, I suspect you don't need to expand it ...

- Section 3: s/agreements(SLAs)./agreements (SLAs).

- Section 7, first paragraph: s/will have/has/

- Section 7, second paragraph:
 s/ICCP is now/If ICCP is/

- Section 7: You use "pseudowire" here whereas in most of the
 remaining document you used "PW".  You may want to be consistent.

Thanks,

- vijay
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