I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-6lo-btle-14.txt Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2015/07/07 IETF LC End Date: 2015/06/09 IESG Telechat date: 2015/07/09 Summary: Ready for proposed standard. Thanks for sorting out the points raised in my last call review. The section on subnet usage is very helpful. There are a few very minor nits that I spotted on reading the new version that can be passed to the RFC Editor if no other changes are needed. Major issues: None. Minor issues: None. Nits/editorial comments: s3, para 2: s/inter- peripheral/inter-peripheral/ [Remove one space] s3.2.2, last para: "(see Section 3.2.2)" is self-referential! I think you mean 3.2.3. s3.2.4.2, last para (Item 3): s/if most recently/if the most recently/ s3.2.4, para 5: To avoid the slight confusion which I had in the previous version, I suggest a modification to this para to make it clear that the link local address can only occur on comms to the 6LBR and not through it, thus: OLD: When a 6LN is sending a packet to or through a 6LBR, it MUST fully elide the source address if it is a link-local address. A non-link- local source address 6LN has registered with ARO to the 6LBR for the indicated prefix MUST be fully elided if the source address is the latest address 6LN has registered for the indicated prefix. NEW: When a 6LN is sending a packet to a 6LBR, it MUST fully elide the source address if it is a link-local address. For other packets to or through a 6LBR with a non-link-local source address that the 6LN has registered with ARO to the 6LBR for the indicated prefix, the source address MUST be fully elided if it is the latest address that the 6LN has registered for the indicated prefix. END s5: Need to expand UART acronym in new Direct Test Mode text (USB is on the well-known list, assuming it is the Universal Serial Bus meaning). s5, last para: s/service attacks/service attack/