[Dave:]
>}One problem that (I believe) Mike Kinyon had with Legend when he tested it
>}last year, and that other people commented on recently, was that he felt
>}that he played only a tiny role in the outcome --- that his actions were
>}largely irrelevant.
Yes, it was I, but it wasn't exactly being a little fish in a big pond that
bothered me. IF is filled with adventurers saving the universe by
blundering around.
[Dave:]
>} I can see why this might be disturbing, but it really
>}couldn't have been any other way. The story is not about you, ultimately.
>}You're just a witness; the real protagonist is JC. You're at best an
>}accidental hero. Your individual role must be tiny in such a gigantic
>}conflict.
I don't really have a problem with this; the statement I have a problem
with is who the "real" protagonist is.
[Matt:]
>I think that's the biggest flaw in the game. I took a lot of actions
>which basically seemed completely disconnected with the flow of the
>game, and had no purpose.
I actually wonder whether the purposelessness that pervades L.L. is,
unlike other IF works, deliberate. Back when I tested the game, it
bothered me, but because of my familiarity with the rest of the Unkuulian
universe, I let it go. Upon reflection, I have decided that the seeming
randomness is, in fact, a commentary on human existence itself: just
as the flap of a butterfly's wings today affects the weather of the world
in a week, so too do the meaningless acts of insignificant people affect
the lives of everyone on a scale beyond individual comprehension.
There are only three IF authors whom I think would force the player to
perform meaningless actions in order to reinforce the theme, and Dave is
one of them. It was a gutsy move, considering how many games there are
that force the player to perform a meaningless act because the author thought
it was a nifty puzzle.
[Matt:]
>The game only moved forward in long tracts of text with no player
>interaction.
Now here I agree, and I consider this to be a separate issue from the
"meaningless acts" point. There were a couple of times while I was watching
pages of text scroll past that I wondered: what happened to the "I" in IF?
[Dave:]
>}It does disappoint me that people are having trouble sympathizing with JC.
Yes, that was a problem I had back in the testing days. I did not interact
with him, I did not get to know him, and other than an intellectual
admiration of his sacrifice, I didn't feel much when he was gone.
I think other people have brought this up, but the obvious comparison here
is with Floyd in Planetfall. I spend many turns of game time and hours of
real time getting to know Floyd, being annoyed when he wouldn't do what
I wanted, laughing at his ridiculous antics, and so on. By the time he made
his (supposed) sacrifice, I knew him pretty well, so I was deeply touched.
I never really knew JC.
[Dave:]
>}The climax is, again, deliberately understated, but I guess I went too far.
Actually, I don't think people are objecting so much to the climax as to
the denouement. But even then, having it understated would have been fine
if I had had a chance to become truly intimate with JC and the others.
OK, that was my post to the newsgroup for this year. (Yes, I realize it
has been a long time.)
Michael
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